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Saturday, January 12, 2008

UNREQUITED

UNREQUITED
Poem by Eve
Pictures by Zayury



Wish I had the answer


To what you're asking me...


Can't give you what isn't mine to give...


Maybe I should let you be.


I try so hard not to go there...


That place we always end up.




Just can't seem to stop...

Always end up needing...

Wanting what isn't right.




Finding myself at your door

In the middle of the night.


I wish this could be different...


Easier somehow.


Less painful for you...


More emotional for me.


Know I'm being selfish...


But cannot set you free.




When you went there...


Where I told you not to go...




When I felt you inside me


After all that time feeling empty...


I couldn't stop.




I can still feel you there,


And my body won't forget.


My heart won't let you in...




But my body screams for you.


Tell me what to do.


I know you have a vision...


Happily ever after...

Forever...

Babies...


But I can't promise you that.




I wish I had the answers, Baby.


Wish I had the right.


But it feels like I have nothing.




Just what we do so well...


That's all I'm sure of.




That's all I can give you now.


I hope it's enough.





17 comments:

Anonymous January 13, 2008 at 9:41 AM  

Well, this is probably going to sound awful, but I know the feeling she's going thru. Eve has described it to the point of perfection, I don't know anyone who could have done it better!

And those pictures are so intense and touching, they truly do justice to the wonderful lyrics.

Great job! I needed this today... You are the greatest!

S@n January 13, 2008 at 10:11 AM  

Love the Lyrics, and the pictures were amazing too, the pictures go perfect with the lyrics, you show all the emotions with each picture. Perfect! :D Amazing, you two are great :P I know, I always say that, but It is true! :P

thewynd January 13, 2008 at 12:59 PM  

This was yet another emotionally packed poem. The feelings jump out at you. Desire, need, guilt, all of it.

The images were perfect...I felt like I was viewing it through the smoke and glow of her cigarette.

I have to say those skin tones are lovely.

Anonymous January 13, 2008 at 5:12 PM  

Ophelia, Sandy, and Gayl, thank-you very much for those wonderful words! Your comments and positive feedback are invigorating! We are very happy that you liked the poem and the pics, THANK-YOU! :wub:

Anonymous January 14, 2008 at 7:43 AM  

This is so emotional! The describtion of her situation is really perfect, I could feel how she does... and the pics were awesome again! Like gayl said already, it was like viewing it through the smoke of her cigarette; so great editing again, too!

Anonymous January 14, 2008 at 1:03 PM  

Beautiful pictures!
Now if I could only understand - truly understand - the meaning of the poem, but I guess that's not for me...

KDSGS January 15, 2008 at 3:38 PM  

Another great effort, astonishing pics and word evoke the sensual mood, well done!

Anonymous January 15, 2008 at 4:48 PM  

Sweet dear friends! Thank-you for your positive and wonderful feedback! Eve and I are grateful for your friendship and support! :wub:

Anonymous January 17, 2008 at 3:21 PM  

Amasing. The poem and the pictures. Great!

Nyell January 23, 2008 at 9:59 AM  

Love it, love it, love it! You two always do absolutely brilliant job together. This is very powerful, unique and so, so amazing! I admire your talents :)
The poem is fantastic, breathtakingly original and the pictures simply left me in awe...
Superbly done!

Anonymous January 24, 2008 at 2:33 AM  

(BLUSHING)Dear Dark and Nyell, my goodness, I can't thank-you enough for your very sweet and flattering comments! Thank YOU for your support of our blog! :wub:

Astral Faery February 20, 2008 at 10:16 AM  

Aw, very sad. She wants to let him live his dreams, but just can't let him go. And he'll never be able to fulfill all of his desires with her. Tragically realistic. Very well done, the pictures match the wording perfectly. I really love the shot of him grazing her breast - how did you do that? I might have to see if I can accomplish that for my story. Great job!

Anonymous February 20, 2008 at 11:28 AM  

My dear Astral, thank-you for the lovely comment, we are very glad that you liked it! :D

LOL! A little tricky but not to difficult! Start with the make-out command, use the snapobjects togrid false cheat, and slide them very carefully to were you want them to be! ;P :D

S@n May 16, 2008 at 8:36 PM  

My dear Zayury the new layout just makes this beautiful blog perfect, now we can admire all the artistic pictures you have here, I love it!! Great job my dear Zayury!

Beautiful pictures, I have to say that again, amazing!

Anonymous October 13, 2008 at 12:03 AM  

My dear Sandy, that means A LOT to me! Thank-you for being such a wonderful friend! :wub:

chardonnay October 28, 2008 at 7:10 AM  

Again a wonderful job!!!

The combination of the pictures with the lyrics....left me with chills.

This one has the Goose Bump Factor!!!

My hat is off to both of you Ladies!!!

Anonymous October 28, 2008 at 7:36 AM  

Oh, thank-you my friend! :wub: I agree this one has a very deep meaning! So glad you enjoyed it and the pics! :wub:

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